Awwww this was so sweet

OOOOOH. I wasn't expecting that ending. Oh dear.

Hahah such a nice and cute short story!

I think this may have been a little too brief, don't get me wrong, when I got to the end I had a ridiculous smile on my face, but, their history is just skimmed through, there's no actual dialogue of them while they are in the relationship. I think if you add about another 500-1000 words, you can still keep it quite short whilst also providing a bit more of a look into their relationship's dynamics.
That would be my only criticism of this piece, I loved the tone and the pace and I don't think I came across any spelling or grammar mistakes (which is quite rare LOL).
Good job D

Awww! Such an odd, cute little story.

:D ten times larger
love it!

Do please continue if you have time :)

I loved this! Super sweet and cute! Thanks for sharing - this made my day! :D

~SnoQueen

very cute. like, friggin adorable!

This is good! But it sort of resembles one of the sand lot movies. the baseball part, her getting hit him helping her. them running in to each other in high school and him not knowing what to say and her telling him to ask her to marry her. It's all exactly the same as the movie

ha ha that was funny, i really liked it ] i hope she said yes to his question because i love happy endings

aww so cute D

love it

I found this story very cute and well written, great job! I think you might want to rewrite the summary so it hooks in more readers.