|Reviews for Sinning On Sunday|
| Blooper256 chapter 3 . 3/16/2010
I love this story! It's super interesting and you take the time to develop the story-line instead of rushing into things.
I love his name btw, Sin Sunday...nice
Oh, and I love Crabmeat Rangoons...yum! You should have em eat some orange chicken...that's also yummy.
You don't have that many mistakes...or at least I know what you mean when you say something that isn't exactly what you mean.
The second chapter had a few extra times when you switched up the times and stuff, which made it a tad confusing. Again, I still understood it, so it's all good.
Looking forward to reading more (if you are planning on writing more that is)!
| Alumina chapter 3 . 11/3/2009
And the story continues to be really good. Can’t wait to read more about the budding relationship between Sin and Gabriel.
| Hallway Rat chapter 2 . 9/3/2009
This is such an endearing story! I usually don't read anything thats not complete but this was too cute to pass up.
| Esquirella chapter 2 . 9/3/2009
This was a very touching chapter. It was good to see them compromise for now. And it seems like each can do something for the other. Sin can get rid of Veronica and Gabriel can watch out for Marcus.
| Alumina chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I really like the story so far - I hope you'll continue with it!
| Esquirella chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Love how this story starts out!