Reviews for girl with rainbows
for shame chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
the last line is incredibly powerful.

out of all the lines, that's the only one that really stood out for me.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Wow, this is really good. Very well written, with strong images and strong words.

I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Wow. This was vivid and heartbreaking. You just wrote how I feel write now.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
I really like this piece, it's relateable and really powerful. I especially love the ending, it's so ironic to be asking for pain, but it make perfect sense. I think your writing is really great as well. I especially love the part about your heartbeat. Awesome job.

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