|Reviews for i'm not perfect, but i'm perfect for you|
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
It's interesting that the speaker is so confident, and yet, she lacks the courage to really make it known to this other person that she's in love with them. Keep up the good work. :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Some of the phrasing seemed off.
"sorry if it isn't good."... good seems like an odd way to describe a statement. Maybe good enough would be better? Or adequate?
"those girls that should be great for you"... I think could would be better here
I liked the piece though. It was really sweet. It was an interesting mix of insecurity and confidence in the narrator. Nicely done.
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