Reviews for idontwantthisanymore
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
I love the structure of this poem. You can feel the emotion bhind each word, a great piece.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
i love the formatting in this piece, it really adds to the depth and meaning of this poem.

beautiful work, as always :)
Isca chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Holy cow. The last stanza completely blew me away. Wow. The fact that the speaker suggests that the other person can't be in a relationship with them anymore and then proceeds to say that they themselves don't feel like living anymore because of that is just so...raw, honest, and moving! :D
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
i really like how the poem is all consise it makes you feel like you are squeezed into a little tiny space.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
so stark, the sadness is conveyed. i hope you're doing okay.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
"sandwitched"... sandwiched... I do like that word choice though. That whole stanza was really good. Great description.

For the most part I liked the format, but the break between the second and third stanza seemed a bit awkward to me.

I like the ending, very sad, but witty at the same time.

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kit feral chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
ouch. so much in so few words.