Sweet and short and to the point. Nice. :D

That was a wonderful poem! Oh if only I could write like that..

- Jazper

A little basic and not very poetic. I think it would have made a better short story than a poem.

Simple and extremely well paced. your situation is one that everybody can idintify with. liked it lots )

Wow...now THAT is some good poetry! And oh so sweet, as well! Just...wow!