haha love this :D its so funny, keep it up you had me cracking up the whole way through :D xx

I'm surprisingly intrigued in your story! :O

keep going! ;D

Haha! Bill gates will steal your penis. :) What a classic line. Do you mind if I walk around saying it?

Anyway, hillarious chapter! Also enjoyed chapter 2 with the chocolate and diarreah. Keep 'em comming!

Cerlean K. Harmony

Aw, I was kinda hoping that there would be some more action or something. It seemed too easy, like Mark gave up too soon. Reach dep into your creative mind and put something really original on here, because you can do so much with boyfriend/brother scenarios. :D There were a few errors in grammar and sentence punctuation, but thoes were all understandable mistakes. It was good! I like it. :D Sounds like something MY niichan would do. haha.

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Cerulean K. Harmony