|Reviews for Rutheless Brutality|
| Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Single-spaced stanzas would look much better with this. It would tie things together more, and you wouldn't have to use the dashes. (Document Manager: Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.)
While some of the rhymes were really clever, some of them were a little awkward. Or for lack of a better word, lame. Particularly toward the end. Don't feel as if you *have* to rhyme. Feel free to use other technical aspects, like alliteration or internal rhymes or something like that. :)
I liked the theme of the poem a lot. It felt believable to me because it's something true. It was 'accurate'.
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