|Reviews for plums, puke, and potatoes|
| speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I’ve read a lot of your poems, and they all blow me away. its hard to stop reading.
sorry if I came across you before and I’m repeating myself. ha.
you’re a very talented poet.
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
"Would you love me if my nethers tasted of vodka?" Ahahaha! This line is so cheeky, creative, and comedic! The 'my nethers' part is particularly awesome. ;)
"Sex and fruit. This I can understand." I love this part - the tone of this line is absolutely PERFECT. :D
"Plums. We went to the store for icecream and came back with plums." I like how fresh and relatable this is. This line's message is also quite lovely: we often set out to do one thing and end up doing something completely different.
Keep up the great work. :)