Reviews for Finding Hair Ribbons On the Bus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapters... and story in general. Love it! Please continue it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too cute these two. Willow is going to mellow him out while Morgan gives her confidence. I love this concept. Please finish, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this! Are you going to update it? I hope you do because I want to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your short stories, theyre the highlight of my day! I just wish they were longer, they always seem to end too quickly. -DianaSweetie |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D what loveliness you have compiled in writing. i know that probably doesn't make sense but i usually just say whatever comes in my head. its brilliant, really. update please. i will wait in anticipation with bated breath. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! Love, loved, loved it! Morgan is a wonderful, troubled character. :-) I like how Lucy Ann teaches him manners and how Willow uses the ribbon to attract him. More of both, please, and update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write really well :) So far, I've been liking most of them :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love detective's name! Also really interested about Morgan, he seems like he has quite a back ground. The girl, Willow, seems a little weak though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're amazing! I just finished Dinner Mints in the Fast Food bag, and then I realized that you had written another story that was part of my favorites! I think you're amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Iy was worth the wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww super cute. They're like two little misfits meant to be together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW THIS SO SWEET! I love it! I love it! hehe. If you can check out my story plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i really like this story so far. i hope u update soon i love that he is such a hard ass but inside hes a softy lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I am absolutely in love with this story right now. Chapter 3's starting to pick up so much. Can't wait for more! |