|Reviews for Saturday's Goods|
| sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Ahh, this is cute and is so familiar to me, haha. :) My only suggestion is that the last line isn't very strong, which gives the poem a slight feeling of unfinished-ness. It's nothing major, as the last line is one that I think is good. But if you were to go back over this, that's something I would suggest that you look at.