|Reviews for A Forbidden Love|
| Keke chapter 27 . 7/21/2012
Hey, your story was great! I always thought that Paige was a beautiful name and at first I had assumed that she would end up with Ash seeing as how much she was in love with him at first. I found myself liking Nathan a lot as well. I wish you would tell us what is up with Garrett as well because I'm really curious. Overall great story, but there were a few grammar and spelling mistakes here or there. But I really enjoyed reading it!
| Tokiryu chapter 24 . 6/20/2012
You need a beta. or to reread all your chapters thoroughly before you post them. The grammar is horrible, and there are parts where I think you wanted to transition to but never actually put it in the story. It's like Paige is doing something in point A then all of a sudden she's doing something in point D, and it leaves the me with this "wtf?" state of what happened. Details are needed. It killed me to read through the story with so much work needing to be done to it but I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your plot. The plot was purely amazing, it would've been even an amazing story if you read through it and fixed errors/typos. Now that I know who Paige is going to be with, I'm going to stop reading her. If your 'edited' story has little to no grammatical errors, I'll read it. But with just scene changes, that gives me doubts. Good luck on your journey to be a writer, I really do wish you the best.
| dreamercrys chapter 26 . 3/29/2012
I loved it sooooo much! I dont want this to be the end... Can't you write a sequel about them all being together and happy and about what is going on with Garret? Please!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 26 . 3/22/2012
I want for them to have a baby!
Wow Annabelle really annoys me:P
| BookAddiction24 chapter 25 . 3/22/2012
They are such a cute couple!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 24 . 3/22/2012
What's that movie where there's a song like, "we are one!"?
Was it Lion King? I think that it was... anyways, it reminded me of that.
| BookAddiction24 chapter 23 . 3/22/2012
She's... becoming... a werewolf...
It's kind of nasty that Ash and her sister are mates! :P
| BookAddiction24 chapter 22 . 3/22/2012
Yay! I love Russell, but I feel bad for Ash... and I don't want Russell to die.
| BookAddiction24 chapter 21 . 3/22/2012
I love this story!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 19 . 3/22/2012
I love this story!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 18 . 3/22/2012
I hate Russell, but I love him at the same time!
I love Ash, but he's also kind of boring.
| BookAddiction24 chapter 17 . 3/22/2012
If a werewolf doesn't kill the werewolf that stole her sister, I will!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 16 . 3/22/2012
Okay, so I finally get to read again! yay!
I think that I like Russell more...
| BookAddiction24 chapter 15 . 3/21/2012
I don't even know what to write about, probably 'cause I'm tired. I'm gonna go to sleep now. I can't wait to keep reading tomorrow!
It's such a good story!
| BookAddiction24 chapter 14 . 3/21/2012
*gasp* the figure is ASH isn't it?