Hey, your story was great! I always thought that Paige was a beautiful name and at first I had assumed that she would end up with Ash seeing as how much she was in love with him at first. I found myself liking Nathan a lot as well. I wish you would tell us what is up with Garrett as well because I'm really curious. Overall great story, but there were a few grammar and spelling mistakes here or there. But I really enjoyed reading it!

Keke

You need a beta. or to reread all your chapters thoroughly before you post them. The grammar is horrible, and there are parts where I think you wanted to transition to but never actually put it in the story. It's like Paige is doing something in point A then all of a sudden she's doing something in point D, and it leaves the me with this "wtf?" state of what happened. Details are needed. It killed me to read through the story with so much work needing to be done to it but I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your plot. The plot was purely amazing, it would've been even an amazing story if you read through it and fixed errors/typos. Now that I know who Paige is going to be with, I'm going to stop reading her. If your 'edited' story has little to no grammatical errors, I'll read it. But with just scene changes, that gives me doubts. Good luck on your journey to be a writer, I really do wish you the best.

I loved it sooooo much! I dont want this to be the end... Can't you write a sequel about them all being together and happy and about what is going on with Garret? Please!

I want for them to have a baby!

Wow Annabelle really annoys me:P

They are such a cute couple!

What's that movie where there's a song like, "we are one!"?

Was it Lion King? I think that it was... anyways, it reminded me of that.

She's... becoming... a werewolf...

It's kind of nasty that Ash and her sister are mates! :P

#300 review

Yay! I love Russell, but I feel bad for Ash... and I don't want Russell to die.

I love this story!

I love this story!

I hate Russell, but I love him at the same time!

I love Ash, but he's also kind of boring.

If a werewolf doesn't kill the werewolf that stole her sister, I will!

Okay, so I finally get to read again! yay!

I think that I like Russell more...

I don't even know what to write about, probably 'cause I'm tired. I'm gonna go to sleep now. I can't wait to keep reading tomorrow!

It's such a good story!

*gasp* the figure is ASH isn't it?