Nathan is an evil little monster.

And I like Russel.

I really want to cry right now!

Noooo! Now I'm sad :(

Don't run away Ash!

Ash! :( I want to cry now

ohmygosh!

This is scary!

Sp, here's the thing, I just found this (:

I'm reading it now

wait can paige have pups or not?

nice story :)I hope Paige will get pregnant w

hey ummm... what year is this set in? i noticed u didn't add a date in and i'm a little confused? is it medieval? *scratch scratch* :D

aside from that- LOVE it so far 3 ur a really good author! :D

This is only meant as constructive critism.

You have a great storyline and some very likeable characters. You're problem is your writting, it feels like you are just mentioning what happens,there are no feelings, and descriptions are at a bare minimum.

It makes the story "flat" you need to write so there will be more depth to it, it has so much potential.

The end seems rushed and you mention a lot of things that have no important connection to the story e.g. Bear stepping down as beta. Nathan revealing his secret is rushed and it doesn't fit the characters that they just accept it so easily.

Again this is only meant constructive, you have so much potential and I do like your stories but they could be even better :)

When is the edited one coming out?

Such an awesome story! It is a really publish-worthy novel!

I realy loved the story keep up writing

I like this story and when I get more time I will read the whole thing, please keep writing.