Hmm, interesting. Frustrating, exciting, confusing, lovely, a bit of everything. I liked it a lot, although I think it could use another ten chapters to allow what happened with Peter and Felicia and Nathaniel's parents, the ending felt a bit rushed. But other than that it was really good :) Thank you.

Twas a nice 1

When jeepers09 favd dis story i knew it wld b a good 1,twas nice but all d mushy mushies had to happen in d last chap,d brk up,the family conflicts,the sisters fight,reunion and love finding,fee is quite a gud sis though,and peter seemed creepy,but in all twas g ud

Amazing! I loved this story so much!
Megan :)

I really enjoyed your story:)) This may sound weird, but I kind of imagine a strawberry blonde Kristen Stewart when I think of Elsa. I hope you write many more stories!

I really love this story hun.

Already good, and I'm on the 2nd chapie. :)

So I just read this all in one sitting, and I have to say it was REALLY good. It was nice to see a story without the typical 'boy is messed up, girl wants to fix him' thing going. She had her own issues to deal with, and they were well written.

The only thing I didn't like, and it's not a bad thing, was how the ending seemed like the climax of the story. Everything important happened and then it just ended. I still wanted to know about Nathaniel and his family, and if their relationship would work out.

Anyway, it was great, and I probably should have gone to bed hours ago, but didn't because I was reading :)

I loved it . :)

-sniffles- sequel? pwease?

I loved this story, thankyou for sharing

:D really well writen and an awesome story

AW. This so feels like it has a sequel but when the author says its over...its over. I wish I could've seen more of Nate and Elsa. T.T

This was a great story overall.

Both Nate and Elsa are stupid and stubborn. Lol

Loved it!