Reviews for Wonderland |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! Good work. Very well crafted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very interesting poem, and the slightly sinister narration only adds to the overall brilliance of the words. Very lovely :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, mysterious, stunning, and haunting. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely imagery! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you played with color and fantastical qualities in this poem. Your opening use of ‘canary yellow’ and then ‘white’ was very strong, and I liked how they played against each other. Colors have a way of showing emotion, and each on is different, and I liked that you chose the ones that you did. Although I think the first stanza was wonderful, I feel like the rest of the poem didn’t follow suite. It felt drab and lackadaisical. It just didn’t have the same playful/sharp vibe that the first section had. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "We are not in Wonderland anymore, Alice." Love love love this. Beautiful imagery as usual |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very beautiful. All the words you chose worked wonderfully together and painted a brilliant picture in my mind. I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot to me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. I adore the imagery and the flow of the words. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lovelovelove this. Your grasp of language is amazing and, despite this being poetry, I felt like the words were playing a scene in my head. I can imagine this being from the rabbit's point of view. :) Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going on my favorites list. Great job. :D |