Reviews for Wonderland
kristy267 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Lovely! Good work. Very well crafted.
Forget-Me-Not's Desire chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
This was a very interesting poem, and the slightly sinister narration only adds to the overall brilliance of the words. Very lovely :D
morphine and lollipops chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Beautiful, mysterious, stunning, and haunting. Bravo.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Lovely imagery!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I liked how you played with color and fantastical qualities in this poem. Your opening use of ‘canary yellow’ and then ‘white’ was very strong, and I liked how they played against each other. Colors have a way of showing emotion, and each on is different, and I liked that you chose the ones that you did.

Although I think the first stanza was wonderful, I feel like the rest of the poem didn’t follow suite. It felt drab and lackadaisical. It just didn’t have the same playful/sharp vibe that the first section had. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)
BatsandBows chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
"We are not in Wonderland anymore, Alice."

Love love love this. Beautiful imagery as usual
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
This is very beautiful. All the words you chose worked wonderfully together and painted a brilliant picture in my mind.

I would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Wonderful.

I adore the imagery and the flow of the words.

Bravo.
emmadotlouise chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I lovelovelove this. Your grasp of language is amazing and, despite this being poetry, I felt like the words were playing a scene in my head. I can imagine this being from the rabbit's point of view. :) Nice work!
Le Tranquille chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
This is going on my favorites list. Great job. :D