Ah ha, that’s what you get for being a douche-bag, Justin.

I appreciate the kink, being a fan of the incest stuff myself. As far as the story goes, the writing isn’t bad, the flow is good, plot is ok… helped me get through my dentist appointment anyway.

Not the best and not the worst. I’m assuming you just wrote it for fun.

Liked it, but what a fucking psycho...

Ok...

woah...twists all over the place. :D

You're plot making skills are really good. While incest isn't really my thing, I have to say it MADE this story. :P

nice work! :)

Well that was unexpected! Awesome though .

Ooh this is very exciting! I like the story and the plot, and also how it's written. Slightly different undertaking of the subject. Intriguing! Good job.

It seems like there's an interesting, dark plot here, but it's very difficult to get into because of the grammar. If you've got access to spell check, I really suggest using it because - even if you don't care about grammar so much - reading a story with bad grammar can be very distracting, and people won't enjoy the story as much.

wait Justin's uncle is Zale's dad? wtf is wrong with Justin? Please reply bck and continue/