*sigh* Love... it's soo beautiful... Amazing job! :) :) The impending doom still has me worried though... ;) keep it up! :)

Sorry I haven't been reviewing! School's been crazy! I promise I have been reading though! Ben's making me soo nervous! He needs to tell her! Or she's going to find out and there's going to be this huge agruement and... well that's why I'm nervous! lol Amazing chapters! I don't think this one fell flat... I liked the way you describe the way each party looked... I just hope that Ben doesn't dig himself into too deep a hole before this is all over! Keep it up! :) :)

I love the way it's written, seems like you put lots of dedication.

I wonder how long it takes you to write a single chapter and if it's hard to kind of create a character.

I wonder about so many things of this story :P.

Like i said before, it's really great, my favorite sort-of-fan-fiction so far :)

I always fall a little in love with my characters... :)

Ben is making me nervous with all these secrets! It's going to blow up in his face because it always does in stories (and real life). I just don't know when it will. Ah! *takes deep breath*

Natalie and her ex-boyfriend... hmm... yeah... now i want to know what's up with them... It seems like it was more his fault than hers... but that could be a bias...

Anywho, yet another amazing chapter! I hope your weekends going well! Keep it up! :) :) :)

That was absolutely fantastic, i loved it.

It's when i start to see a little bit about Ben being conscious of his actions and how they'd end...

I have no words, i just think it's amazing...

Update soon, please!

yay! They finally agreed to something a little more serious! *sigh* "Have a wonderful night, Natalie." *swoon* Why does he have to be so charming? Amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next! keep it up! :)

I like the beginning a lot with the pen... I'm not really sure why but I think it emphasized the length of time between each of their run-ins with each other... and I'm glad you gave us some more background information on the ever mysterious Ben... :)

Ben does think a lot, over thinks, but I don't think that you're being too repetative or anything... it's just his character...

The part at the park, where Halo runs into her, amazing! :) And the time the spend simply laying in the grass and the way that he tries to take in every detail... *sigh* Absolutely fantastic job, Keep it up! :) :) :)

What are you talking about? The way Ben's thoughts are written makes everything perfect, it makes me feel in the way i think he does.

to explain too much doesn't mean you ramble on writing, it means that you're dedicated on what you're doing and for me that's just wonderful.

Don't change anything, unless you're sure it would be just to improve.

I always say (and sorry if it sounds selfish) that it's great when ppl like what i write, but i write for me and as long as i am okay with it, ppl's opinions are a 30% of what i think about my writing.

And it actually works, you know? when you write for you not caring about what other ppl will think or want, makes ppl like it, because it's unexpected after all.

I could give you a lot of examples of authors who did what they thought the readers would want and it ended up just bad for 'em.

so just do whatever you want with it, so far it has been great ;)

you have so many amazing quotes in here! I can't even count them! "I was caught in the act, and not a part of me cared." I love the ending, absolutely love it! And that part where she wandering about and he thinks she's getting a speech ready so she can yell it at him, So amazing! Keep it up, chica! :)

Oh, i am not good expressing with words how i feel about what i am reading (weird, huh?) just wanted to say:

I am the girl from LJ who asked you for the link to read this story.

Liked natalie's version BUT, this is even better, 'cause when i finished reading, i was wondering what was happening through Ben's head, so it's really cool to have his version.

I can't complain about anything, i'd like to add that it's really obvious that you have improved since the first chapter of ambushed, so it's really great, quite original, actually.

Hope you can update soon.

I am basically addicted to this story (:

This my favorite chapter yet! I love it! Okay so maybe I'm a sucker for knights-in-shining-armor... but hey... isn't everyone? lol

The line, "The blush on her cheeks was like a fire and I was the moth drawn to the flame." I love it! It's amazing! Great job! Keep it up, chica! :)

another awesome chapter :) I want to know what Ben's hiding! But it's so cute how he's all like I don't want to see... well maybe I do... he's so unsure which is new to him because he's always sure with everything else...

Sydney's an interesting character... in a good way... she's kind of annoying but I think I'm kind of biased because of Ben... Black coffee... that fits him :) Amazing job! Keep it up! :)

wow... lol... I've never had someone personally thanks me.. So thanks a billion... Since I haven't read Ambushed! I can't really tell about how Ben fits... but I really like him as a character... he has all these different sides... I don't know how you manage to keep track of them all :)

I'm not so sure about Adam... as a person I mean... He's a great character... just not my kind of people or whatever :)

Also I absolutely love the part where Adam askes, "What did she do to you?" and the paragraph after... amazing :) It's funny how flustered Ben is about her :) Keep it up ;)

he's very charming lol... a little full of himself but *shrugs* I suppose I can forgive that :) I love the last line, it really ties everything in the chapter together... Amazing job once again! :) Keep it up!