i really liked the "I can see your face as the wind whips past,And remember your face as if it were etched in glass" part. it must have been horrible for your friend, it's so hard to lose your friends, and at suicidal never the less..

The ending was brutal, but than again suicide is nothing of a happy ending. I'm sorry your friend had to go through this. I thought you did a wonderful job writing it though, your rhymes were perfect and not forced. Keep it Up!