this was really sweet. i was grinning by the time i read the last sentence too. _

This was amazing. An overall good story, thanks for writing it!

Crazy little story. And soo lovely! I like it, it was fun to read it.
Your ending was just "Awwwww!".

Loved this. I get that this is it, but if this was a novel, I'd buy it.

Okay

Very nice! Incredible characters ...

this was sooooo nice :)

Damn, its sweet. Love the 'baby' part. I think I'm in love. XD

Interesting start.
The narration is cool. Not anexpert, but I really like this. XD

This is just a big yes. I love it.

A very nice story.

Nicky was a surprise. Instead of the carefree, party guy, he was devoted to inheriting the family business and proving himself.

Joey was sweet and caring. He definitely wouldn't make it as a hitman. But his feelings for Nicky are true.

: )

Nice, short, and sweet.
I think this is a wonderful read.
thanks for writing.

Ah, this would've been unbelievably epic if it was longer. You got the mafia part down without the characters turning out so utterly gay and submissive unlike other authors. Joey's a ball of witty awesomeness and Nicky's the (emphasis on the 'the', bro) son of the boss. I mean, who wouldn't love that kind of pair. It was an easy pleasant read and only regret is that we don't get to read 'bout what they do after hooking up. Ah well, much more for our imagination, I guess. Kudos, JJ!

Amazing, amazing, amazing. You're a great story teller and this one in particular was fantastic.