|Reviews for Just Drive the Car|
| Yoona chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
What a love story...
I adore every chapter of it...
| Ben Tramsami chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
This was kinda cute. I really enjoyed reading this short story. Nice job. :)
| SparkaLynn chapter 4 . 12/23/2010
This is the sweetest story I have read on fictionpress thus far in my career as a reader! Your characterizations are brilliant, and I love how realistic your dialogue is in this story. Its short and sweet, and the ending is simply adorable.
| Zethoa chapter 4 . 12/6/2010
Jesus. You're one helluva writer. Now I feel like I've gotta read everything you've done.
Seriously though, you have a great, straightforward style and a knack for interesting plots. I'm loving what I'm reading. )
| DevilishMisfit chapter 4 . 11/13/2010
Thanks for this amazing piece of literature. This is the best fictional story about the mafia that I have ever read.
| Iuno chapter 4 . 10/24/2010
Beautiful. I love how Little Nicky didn't turn out to be a stereotype emo kid with his fashion sense. I love their dads too! From the way they understood their sons and the complications of being in the business mixed with gay children.
| ami-mochi1 chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
love the dialogue in this! It's so natural. I wish this was longer, this definitely feels like it could be an entire verse.
| rachel chapter 4 . 6/12/2010
no where's the rest? need more like a crack addict T_T
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| MantraMagazine chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
That was a really awesome story. To quote some book I read; "It's nice to see that thing called friendship between two gangsters." 'Cept this is better of course. When it really hit me you were writing about the mafia, I didn't think you could pull it off, but you did. Thanks for posting. I won't put you on alerts, but hopefully favorites is all right. :D
| PapaMike chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Yes the gangster fic! It's official, you rock the socks.
I especially liked how not cutsey this fic was. I'm so bored sifting through pages of "omgz! My name is Takashi(or some other suitably generic azn name). I love you, but do you love me? oh thats good cos now we can live happily forevar and have lots of buttsex" Gems like this make it worth it.
| whitecrow chapter 4 . 2/26/2010
This is so good! And written so well, told in your inimitable style. You're really good, you know that? Blew any constructive feedback/crit right out of my mind. Just perfect. Thank you!
| Mewenn chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
That's excellent. It's also a short story that deserve another story showing Nicky and his "right hand man who got his back" (literally and graphically if possible) climb their way to the top.
| Mewenn chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I usually avoid T- rated stories but in this particular case I don't even care if the car has more chances to get laid than any of the actual characters. Your style is just plain brilliant.
| ruruxrainbow chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
A-aw. I liked it. Too bad you won't write more.