|Reviews for Just Drive the Car|
| eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
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| MantraMagazine chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
That was a really awesome story. To quote some book I read; "It's nice to see that thing called friendship between two gangsters." 'Cept this is better of course. When it really hit me you were writing about the mafia, I didn't think you could pull it off, but you did. Thanks for posting. I won't put you on alerts, but hopefully favorites is all right. :D
| PapaMike chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Yes the gangster fic! It's official, you rock the socks.
I especially liked how not cutsey this fic was. I'm so bored sifting through pages of "omgz! My name is Takashi(or some other suitably generic azn name). I love you, but do you love me? oh thats good cos now we can live happily forevar and have lots of buttsex" Gems like this make it worth it.
| whitecrow chapter 4 . 2/26/2010
This is so good! And written so well, told in your inimitable style. You're really good, you know that? Blew any constructive feedback/crit right out of my mind. Just perfect. Thank you!
| Mewenn chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
That's excellent. It's also a short story that deserve another story showing Nicky and his "right hand man who got his back" (literally and graphically if possible) climb their way to the top.
| Mewenn chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I usually avoid T- rated stories but in this particular case I don't even care if the car has more chances to get laid than any of the actual characters. Your style is just plain brilliant.
| ruruxrainbow chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
A-aw. I liked it. Too bad you won't write more.
| Anti-Joker chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
You are some kinda genius, you know that? Great read.
| lotrdeana17 chapter 4 . 10/20/2009
I really enjoyed this short story. It had a lot of warmth to it. The different scenarios you write about are so different with an astounding clarity. You really create each world you write about, and I love that. It's always a pleasure to read your work.
| mousegirl05 chapter 4 . 10/18/2009
Once again, I have noting of deep construct to offer. This just means that you've knocked me off my typical grammar-style-word choice-and-theme-picky-soapbox. The pacing is great and the plot is excellent. I can tell why so many people want you to continue this. *laughs* It's excellent. It takes some authors hundreds of pages to build up characters they way you've done in such a short span. As I mentioned in it's comment, I read the spin-off first. I must say I liked both POVs. They're both great. Joey is excellent. Nicky is fabulous. Yep. That's all. Cheers!
| Rhod chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
| Weinerdog of Death and Doom chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
Damn, that was good. Technically, I'm supposed to be working on my writing right now, but I decided to go on over to FP and read. Glad I did, this is one really good story. I liked it a lot.
| Jixnce chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
Aw - that was adorable. _
| AnnaG.Luv chapter 4 . 9/12/2009
I want to say "fuckin cute", but I don't know if FP lets people swear in their reviews; but just saying "cute" doesn't do it justice. If that makes any sense.
| sern chapter 4 . 8/25/2009
i loved this, a lot. i was looking for something short and complete to read and so this made me very happy. :)
you never ever see any mafia fics that are nice and short; they all look like they'd take me days to read and i just can't be bothered. so when i saw this, i was thrilled.