|Reviews for When I Grow Up|
| A Rose in Weeds chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
At first glance i like this piece. Thought it was to confusing and sorta garbled then i realized, towards the end, that the author was pouring their confusion, ideals and ideas onto the page. I've reread it about 5 times now. So i digress, well formulated theme and sentence structure. Especially the way they break and leave room for thought and imagination. An 8 and one half. Keep writing.