thats sweet! the words are good, but the rythme is off. but i really like this!

This's me leaving my promised first of two reviews from Lori Blake!

Though the rhythm is a bit off, the message gets across just fine. I hope your brother comes home soon (I'm too lazy to scroll up and see when you published this, so perhaps he is home already!). Very nice.

Gosh, I suck at leaving reviews...T_T