Reviews for hold your fire and maybe then i'll hold your hand
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I absolutely love this!

I like the end,

"if we make it through this dead, o g."

I like how you said dead or breathing and not dead or alive.

A great piece :)
Ice chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Wow. Crisp and even. I like it a lot. Well written.