Love where you are going so far with the story. But, since you said you aren't happy with it... May I suggest doing a major overhaul on it then? I love the plot, but if you aren't happy with it, then redo it to a style that fits you now. I'm sure your readers will understand. You need to do what is right for you.

OMG I was thinking of making a story based on Taylor's songs too! But somehow I think yours will always be better than mine...:)

Update soon! :D

~Ronnie~

You've written a truly amazing story, thanks for sharing it with us :)

WTF...that was unexpected...

I absolutely LOVE this! I love how it's kinda following the music video, but you put your own twist to it. Really creative! Kudos. :P

Update soon, Cause I'm totally putting this on story alert :)

so far I'm enjoying this story and I absolutely love this song so it makes the story even better! update as soon as u can pleez!

Keep going (please), Im loving it so far!

P.S. I know what you mean about the comeback thing, mine is shut up too. :P

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I love this song and the music video. Im so glad you're writing this story. great job!

OMG! You are such a great author. I bet you're going to become as famous as J.K. Roling someday.

BTW, I am writing a book called Floridia. I'm on Chapter 4, which is the prom scene. Can you help me finish the chapter by giving me song pointers? I will be posting Chapters 1-3 tomorrow, so read it and tell me what you think! Thank you.