|Reviews for Liturgical|
| SaphireTsukikage chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
| Keree chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
So deep, so charming...
(remember me... I'M THE NICE ONE!)
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
your work will never cease to amaze me.
| Isca chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
"Rosewood hair." I love your use of the word 'rosewood' here - it makes the description that much more vibrant.
"Speak." The tone of this line is almost frightening - as if someone is commanding the speaker (who is presumably dead because of his 'dry veins) to talk - that's both morbid and brilliant.
I like the way in which the lines 'ruby spills,' 'he erupts,' and 'premium rose,' tie together - the flower metaphor here is beautiful and powerful. :)
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Wow. Powerful piece. Especially the ending. Fabulous imagery thoughout, too. Fabulous work. Keep writing! :)
| Doxie Doll chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I love how you repeat the numbers near the end.
| StarlightWish17 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Epicc! EPIC I TELL YOU!
| SpottedStar chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
very intriguing, but good all the same :)