Reviews for Fierce Eyes and Idle Tongues
jag finns inte chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I'm going to answer your question. His eyes were really the only thing I could see clearly in my mind. There is this really really young teacher in my school and his eyes are almost identical to how you discribed the princes. They are very beautiful.
Blooper256 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
The story was really great! To answer your question, I definitely got a good sense of what the eyes looked like. Overall I thought you had great descriptions that made it easy to visualize the prince, Jamison, and the locations. I looked up that picture, and I couldn't believe it because that's almost exactly how I was picturing them!

I'm curious to know about your writing process!

P.S. I loved the fact that the prince was mute. Obviously that's not just an element but a central theme, but I thought you used it in a unique way!
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
That was lovely - you portrayed the characters well and gave a wonderful description of the Prince's eyes!
big.break.and.laryngitis chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Wow, that was really good. Well, "really good" doesn't really cover it very well, obviously, because it was REALLY good. It is late and I am bad at coming up with proper adjectives, so... let's just say "really good" for now, okay? I usually don't even review one-shots unless I've read like, everything in existence written by the author, but this was just that good.

Oh, yeah. Image of his eyes in a big way. I'm not sure if it's quite the same mental picture as you have, but it is most definitely very, very there, and clear. And now it's stuck in the forefront of my mind, and I cannot get rid of it. Amazing.

This was a very good piece. Good job.
Misanthropic Philanthropist chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I have got to say that I think that you really described his eyes really well. I definitely had a really clear picture of them, good job.

This story ends really suddenly. I like it, when I write I find endings are the hardest to do. I was expecting more closure though. The Prince gets married... and... what does that mean for the two of them.

I definitely like your writing though. You don't sacrifice quality for quantity at all.

In fact the only real criticism I have is that it was a bit short. I prefer stories that are a bit longer so I can get to know and care about the characters a bit more.

Yay, I liked it, keep writing more for me to read.