Reviews for City Red
gumdropj chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
haha, I like these lines right here:

I grinned to myself as I heard footsteps approaching. Bending over, I reached for the duster that I dropped.

I stopped there and I was like, sure you dropped it on "accident"

And for the record, I actually dropped it. It was just perfectly timed with the footsteps.

That clears things up! :D

The end is actually sweet, if you don't think about her past...
gumdropj chapter 4 . 5/1/2010
No, I will not join her!


Loving the stories.
gumdropj chapter 3 . 5/1/2010
Hm, I sense a theme! And a very good one at that! :)
gumdropj chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
*gasps* What an unlucky day. What an unlucky girl. All of this bad crap happens to her and then... BAM! She gets hit by a train on top of everything else. Sucks to be in her shoes.. :/

Here you go:


One rose, for the unlucky girl. :\ *sniffles*
gumdropj chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Wow, that was really good! :D I can't believe she killed her friends. I wasn't even expecting that. When she got the knife... man, that is really messed up.

Love the story, though! :)