|Reviews for City Red|
| gumdropj chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
haha, I like these lines right here:
I grinned to myself as I heard footsteps approaching. Bending over, I reached for the duster that I dropped.
I stopped there and I was like, sure you dropped it on "accident"
And for the record, I actually dropped it. It was just perfectly timed with the footsteps.
That clears things up! :D
The end is actually sweet, if you don't think about her past...
| gumdropj chapter 4 . 5/1/2010
No, I will not join her!
Loving the stories.
| gumdropj chapter 3 . 5/1/2010
Hm, I sense a theme! And a very good one at that! :)
| gumdropj chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
*gasps* What an unlucky day. What an unlucky girl. All of this bad crap happens to her and then... BAM! She gets hit by a train on top of everything else. Sucks to be in her shoes.. :/
Here you go:
One rose, for the unlucky girl. :\ *sniffles*
| gumdropj chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Wow, that was really good! :D I can't believe she killed her friends. I wasn't even expecting that. When she got the knife... man, that is really messed up.
Love the story, though! :)