Reviews for My Life Is You |
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![]() ![]() YOU FORGOT THE WEDDING AND THE HOT STEAMY HONEYMOON ! SO NOT GOOD TO LEAVE THE STORY HANGING LIKE THIS. BAD AUTHOR, BAD AUTHOR. NO CANDY FOR YOU. YOU ARE HERE BY GROUNDED UNTIL WE GET OUR WEDDING AND HONEYMOON ! UH ! UH ! NO BROWNIES OR NOOKIE EITHER ! WEDDING ! HONEYMOON ! GET TO WRITING ! HUP-TWO-THREE-FOUR AND A WRITING WE WILL MERRILY GO ! WELL AT LEAST I GOT YOU TO LAUGH, HUH ! |
![]() ![]() YOUR WRITING ABILITY IS VERY GOOD. PLEASE THINK ABOUT WRITING MORE. HAVE YOU THOUGHT OF HAVING A WRITING BUDDY TO WRITE WITH ? IT MIGHT BE WORTH LOOKING INTO. AT LEAST YOU COULD MAKE A FRIEND. GAY WEREWOLF AND GAY VAMPIRE, ETC. ARE POPULAR GENRES YOU MIGHT LOOK INTO. PERSONALLY I REALLY THINK THERE HOT. WEREPANTHERS ARE GOOD TOPICS ALSO. HAVE YOU TRIED .COM YOU MIGHT GET A STORY IDEA FROM THERE. SOME OF THEM ARE VERY GOOD WORKS ! SOME OF MY FAVORITE STORIES ARE "XOLT", TA'NARIAN CHRISTMAS, PELAAM-"SILVER" STORY, VAMPIRES AND LOVERS, OPPOSITES ATTRACT, CATS AND DOGS, AND QUITE A FEW OTHERS ARE GOOD. M.A. CHURCH-THE AUTHOR OF "THE HARVEST: TAKEN" WROTE "A TA'NARIAN CHRISTMAS" ITS REALLY GOOD. OH ! "AN ALIEN PRISON" STORY IS REALLY GOOD TOO. YOU MIGHT ALSO LIKE .COM TOO. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for a great story! |
![]() ![]() This is a sweet story & I love the caracters. To me, the best is when you feel like you want to meet them, like you could be one of their friends smiling when you see the love between them. It's a really warm feeling & I love stories who make me smile like that. The story is well written, it has a good rythm & Dillon's progress, the physical & emotional are well depicted. |
![]() ![]() I just love your story. Seth is just so sweet and jeremy is such a good friend. I kept reading this over and over again. I'm hlad it ended happily but somehow it makes me want more. Sorry for being selfish. Anyways. You have an amazing talent. Oh also, i was wondering what they each looked like. I understand that they are masculine but what are their other feats? Like how long was dillons hair and did seth really pony tailed his hair. What color are their hair and seth's eyes? Sorry i'm just a curious person. Oh but one last question. Did dillon ever discovered that seth was his roommate for a week during his first stay at the hospital? anyways. Love your work. Hope to read more soon. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daw I love it~! xD I wanna go to that spa. Seems like an amazing place x3 I also like the fact that there was a blind main character! What are you going to write about next? :D |
![]() ![]() You are an amazing wordsmith...that was very good indeed, the characters endearing, the story credible and captivating and the love most delightful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmmmmm...~ Good story. I liked it. Good plot and everything. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ending! I was kinda hoping Dillon can use his eyes again, so Brad would regret leaving him XD but it's alright, this still good! Seth is probably the best gay man ever! I must say Jeremy is one of my favorite character. His loyalty to his bestfriend amazed me. Overall, this is a very entertaining story. Thank you for taking your time writing this :) I hope you'd write the sequel you promised on your profile. I'll be waiting :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awee :) *tears* how sweet! That was truly adorable! However the beginning of this chapter did give me a scare! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well thank god the drama is over! Well at least I think so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so can I say that this beyotch has officially gone crazy? I mean I don't know of anyone else caught it but doesn't she have the wrong Dillon? Her Dillon is spelt like 'Dylan' while this Dillon is spelt like 'Dillon' so I think this lady needs psychiatric help! And I gotta give you props! This story went from remorseful to adorable to plain psycho! I love it! :D this plot reminds me off the movie Misery! It scared the bejeebies out of me and at this moment this story is pretty trippy but I love it! It's definitely got it's own twist and you don't find many stories like this on FP! So I thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god she drugged him! :O stupid lady! Oh I hope some realizes what this wench is doing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that ruthless bitch! -.- how dare she take away Dillon's source of fun? Oh man I hope Seth follows his heart and goes after dillon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this reminds me of a Diary of a Mad Black Women when her ex was shot and he needed her and she just let him learn on his own like Seth was doing for Dillon and oh my god this is one great story! I have a feeling that Seth is going to give Dillon the strength he needs to live all with the power of love :) |