Reviews for can I kiss you?
Solemn Coyote chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
I can't really offer any meaningful analysis of this. Which seems like a poor trade. In exchange for getting to read "can I kiss you?", I'm offering nothing in return. However, I can say that this is fantastic and that you seem to have a real knack for channeling emotion through your poetry.

-sa
kyox88 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
love the idea of using one word at a time, and then elaborate about it! that is so nicenice poem, good job!