this was a very very very good story do far but i think I'm gonna stop here. i feel like the 'cheating' storyline does not go with the plot and seems unnecessary to be honest. nevertheless thank you for the good read

Well done, thanks for the read.

So, what I'm getting from the last couple chapters was that he was effectively raped and Kyrave's treating him like he cheated on him. World of difference between the two, I mean, am I the only one outraged by this?

I like Kyr, just like my Front rn 'Kir' (oot)

I don't think this story heart throb moments will ever end. They're wonderful, I perfectly understood Tyne way of thinking but it's not good to punish yourself. I was expecting this telepathy thingy (though not really telepathy), was surprised when Rave suddenly on his bedroom and act all badass I-know-you-need-me, finally Tyne caved in and in the end, he's happy. This need more conflict though, there's so much thing that could happen. With Tyne super marvelous power, I don't think this one will be the Calm and Peace kind of story

I Love this story I'm going to suggest it to some friends if they haven't already come acrossed it yet

thanks :)

wow ok, I read this pretty much at once and it's just fantastic. Have you tried getting this published?
I mean right from the beginning when it was pretty confusing with the stranger and the gun, to the understanding and the awesome plot too.
I wish I could review more in depth but there's just too much to say.
One of my favourite stories I've read on here and hurray! It's actually finished too :)
Thankyou.

I didn't realize when I started these books what kind of adventure I would be taken on. This was/is incredible written, with a great scenery, story, background, caste, etc. I loved everything about this story, especially the happy ending. I am so please I got to read this in one go, as it would have been agony waiting for each chapter.

I thank you so much for sharing this story!

Ok, fuck it I can't take it anymore. First Tyne 'cheating' was abrupt, stupid, and very unnecessary for the story I don't know if you ran out of idea's or what and there 'make-up' was even more annoying and abrupt. Through out there 'break-up' they did nothing but avoid each other but claimed they still loved each other.
The hell?
After there 'make-up' they both realized how wrong was both wrong even though Tyne had tried his best to explain but suddenly Kyr doesn't want to listen, ok that's understandable but not listening for EIGHT FUCKING MONTHS IS RIDICULOUS ESPECIALLY IF YOU CLAIM TO LOVE THAT PERSON, seriously if I was cheated on I wanna know why, wouldn't you?
How the hell does he have children? If it was that girl he ducked then they really shouldn't be feeling much of anything cause they'd only be about a month old.
You story started off good but now it just fucking sucks, the only reason I finishing it is because I'm almost done with it. I hardly ever leave negative reviews but this was just too idiotic

Fuck you Kyr! You spend months ignoring him and suddenly you want to know everything about him after you didn't let him explain shot? Go fuck yourself, asshole!

Hijacked Heart is the second story I read by MouseGirl. As I've grown to expect, the world-building was solid and the characters very interesting. However, one thing which I wasn't sure about was Tyne's denial of his past as Ryme. I can't truly think of Tyne and Ryme as a different person. Tyne simply seemed like a second personality of Ryme, created after the trauma of seeing what would happen to Rave - much like Ryme himself said. While Tyne considered himself an individual independent from Ryme, I wouldn't say that was exactly correct, or really healthy. Our pasts are a part of us, after all. Also, I would have personally preferred it if Tyne only had that close bond with Kyr, not also with the other two Bulwarks. But that's just my personal preference and I can understand why the author chose this way instead.
Still, the story was great in both volumes, and I enjoyed it a great deal. Some things I expected, others were surprising. I would really like to see a sequel, but even if this doesn't happen, Hijacked Heart is still on my favorites list.

Very nice story with some very cute characters along the way. Sighs contentedly.

I adore little Wave!

Great beginning! Let's see if the rest is as satisfying...

This was one complicated & fascinating story. At the beginning I wasn't so sure but luckily I kept going. There are some great scenes & I really like how the characters evolve. Bubbles and Cuddles, you should have seen me laugh each time Kyr teases the 2 cuties, poor Bethar! lol