Reviews for She's a Rule Breaker, Not a Troublemaker
Marie Charlotte chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
This was really funny and AWESOMETASTIC!
sunshinernnr chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Love the story! My favorite things about it are 1) Lack of corny/mushy "I've always loved you" moment 2) the quirky main character and her kooky thought processes 3) the dialogue and flow, it's easy (and interesting) to read and follow.

The only thing that made me pause about the story was that the ex-boyfriends all had the same reaction: "they . . . never look me in the eyes again and go very red whenever I try to initiate a conversation." That seems a little off to me. Plus it seems odd that Chris knows exactly what impression all the boyfriends got: "They were embarrassed. They thought you were using them or just purposefully trying to embarrass them." So I thought that part was weak but the rest of the story rocks!
goldenspork chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
"cross implies that I simply stepped over the line to ponder how the light was on the other side. No, I barreled over the line, and then I just kept on going."

That line just made me laugh. Props.
bonghi chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I am glad you plan some more one-shots because they are all extremely enjoyable. They make me laugh but also fill me with tenderness. So I am impatiently waiting for the next one.
Ellen Rachael chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
aw. I guess breaking rules can get you love, too, huh? _
inlovewithcliches chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
i loved this! you should write more like this :)
Noie chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Great job with this; you made the character's panic and worry all very believable. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Nicochic chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Wow, I loved this!

My heart wrenched for Allie, yet she made me laugh with the narrative, especially her worrying over the name "Allie O'Malley", Chris' awkward explanation of what he did with Allie, the fact Allie took Chris along for her dates and the dad's random interjection of "Who wants icecream?" Haha. Dads!

Love this-it's so sweet-and the last 3 lines are great. :)
emerald325 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I was laughing from the end when she found out that she was being paranoid from the curse XD This is one of the best stories I have ever read
Wedgiee chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I loved it!

It's really really good :)

cant wait to see more from you
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