|Reviews for Darts|
| burlap chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
| underrose chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
although i would usually dislike the technique (or lack thereof) of your poem, it does manage to convey the meaning in such an understated way-
for example, the person speaking in the poem had a "lucky shot"- they did not do the work of many others who died, forgotten, but were successful nonetheless.
your poem goes along the same way! (:
i like it.
| Aeuriga chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
| studentofwords chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Nice. I like it. There's only one thing I'd change: for the line "as a prisoner or slave?" Other than that, great!