Reviews for The Millionaire's Proposition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story. I'm really pleased you decided to post it here. Well done. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() Loved it. Update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is probably one of your best. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I cant wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! And the sentences were awesome! Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() its real good so far. I cant wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it! and i hope you post more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor bailey! :( jerry is a jerk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wowowow! i love this! please update soon ! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it once again. Update soon! Blessings Marie |
![]() ![]() I really like your story so far! Update soon please (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You have a new story! It's pretty well-written so I kudos on that! Update soon :) P.S. Can I just say that the name Wolf is so sexy?:P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, me likes! Post the next chapter! You have to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story sounds pretty good! The only advice I can give you is to make the sentences a bit shorter or use a few more commas because they seem to drag on a bit. Other than that Awesome chapter! It was hilarious when she fainted in the lift! And this may sound weird but I have read so many stories about the mean but hot boss, so seeing him being nice kind of took me by suprise... not used to the hot and nice boss, but i think it might be a refreshing change! (why do i sound so old!)lol Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really like it. UPDATE SON! |