Reviews for The Order
Stardrag chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
OH YEAH! I love encyclopedias for stories and stuff. They always seem better because of it!

THIS IS FICTION. It could (better as would) be cool (if)this existed, but the odds are it doesn't. Nobody get angry for any depiction. On the offhand (that some) events sound similar to other things you have read or seen, it would be pure coincidence, reference, or homage, (maybe a period?) for example, if you read manga (stupid question) be prepared to notice stuffs (take the s off). : you post this allot, but it's not needed when something above it already states it. I corrected the problems on there with parentheses, okay? the one that says "stupid question is yours though.

Oh, and the thing with the globe is confusing and feels thrown in there.

~SD
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Heart of The Tainted chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
you missed one major area of population. India, which holds 10% of the worlds population (one billion people).