This haven't been updated in months. Oh please, oh please update... i love this story.
it's kinda like alana's adventure or magic study series. so cool. :3

Damn! I was really looking forward to reading another chapter. Ah well beggers can't be choosers lol but this is a great story with a lot of mystery behind it. Which is always good, I really enjoyed this story and would like to see moreover it so if you can please continue soon. :)

This was an awesome chapter.

Cool story, Hope you update soon.

She is rather amusing, I like her personality. And the council is amusing as well. :D

Very interesting and refreshingly unique as well as highly entertaining. I can't wait to read more!

-Raven-

HOORAY for VIOLENT GREEN EYES! LOLZ.

Sorry for not reviewing or anything in a while... and making this review small... I've been reading them but I keep forgetting to go back and reply and it's been a while since I've read these so I'll just wait till the next chappies to come out till I start giving feedback again. I was just double checking that I'd read the newest chapters and realized I hadn't reviewed in a while.

Just thought I'd let ya know I am still here tho. I've just had lots of real life stuff and keep forgetting bout stuff on here. Sorry.

Hooray, another chapter! The plot just keeps getting better. It's almost hard to read the chapter since I know it's going to be great and then it just ends. I adore this story! It's such a breath of fresh air compared to so many other stories on this site. Lovely! :) Can't wait for the next update!

Very interesting story, I can't wait for more. I love all the history you've set up. All of your ideas are extremely creative. I haven't read a story with this much detail in who knows how long. It's extremely refreshing. It kinds of reminds me of the girl version of Eragon, except without dragons and many other things. But I love the whole idea of the story. Wonderful job crafting it all together. How long did it take you to come up with all this? Truly remarkable.

OMGGG! I loved it! That is a REALLY unfair way to end it, although I'm sure that you love to keep us hanging!

Keep up the great work and update as quickly as you can :)

Ahhh... And here I thought Reeli was SO nice... Oh well, guess I majorly missed that one...

LOL. Luved the bit with the clothes. Poor Kahzey - being forced to wear so little in front of men.

And I wonder if her father knows that she got kidnapped by the Princess... If so why didnt he WARN her... O.o

Luved it - Plz update soon :D

P.S. - yeah... I think this is much smaller than most my reviews... :( Sigh, just not sure what to say... not very talkative right now.

I just don't get it. What exactly was she doing at the very beginning of the story? How was she flying, or was she falling? It is very confusing.

What? This is a repeat of chapter 2!

Finally, this chapter makes sense. The first time I read it, the previous chapter was missing. One thing, a bucket is also called a pail, not a pale.

Ok... So I was curious and went back to reread the 4th chapter since you said you'd added another argument in it... but um.. i think something got messed up cuz i looked and now it looks like the 4th is replaced with the 2nd chapter... Just thought i should mention that...

But I really liked this new chappy. :) So at first i thought the pink-eyed girl was one of the magical descendants on the Aieran side but then when you mentioned the language difference and all i'm wondering if she aint another of the Black Mountain. Which means Kahzey mighta just made another enemy O.o And I cant believe she plans to tell the army bout her hand... Hopefully the kind prince will save her from everyone's wrath...