|Reviews for you are the color of spacetime|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
nit pick: "where I may drive quicker then sound." then to than.
i like that you put "love making" in parenthesis.
like it's indecent and secret.
and i like the thought of throwing up words and becoming un-whole.
rather than having a broken heart or soul or whatever.
it's a nice change up from the cliche. :)