Reviews for I Can Swallow Summer
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
I find this quite powerful. Very well phrased.

'their words


the nectar


a lit


A great line to end this piece.

Keep up the wonderful work!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I liked the concept of this one, and the play on words. Like the last piece I’m getting a heavy current of sexuality, and I don’t think I’m wrong.

The piece itself seems unfinished to me. It seems that you have a beginning, and a middle, but the end is unwritten.

I also liked the football player note in this; it gave it a youthful flare that might not have caught my attention otherwise. Keep up the good work.

Much love,


Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)
Alice Cullen629 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
wow, this is really good!
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Wow, this is really good. That first stanza just completely drew me in and I knew I had found another wonderful poet here on fictionpress!

"Their words like the nectar of a lit cigarette" is just amazing.

Great work.