Wow, what an excellent find. I just love your style of writing! You really do have a talent, especially when it comes to description. I've seen some stories that are lacking the description or overflowing with it, but you've got just the right balance! Now that's challenging :p
Everything is brilliant, just a few minor punctuation mistakes, but hey -we all encounter that problem.
I am new to the website, would you please mind reading the first chapter of my story? I've pasted the link below. Criticism would be great, thank you and keep up with the wonderful work!

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This is really good. :) I got goosebumps on my arms when I was picturing the werewolf. Especially it's eyes. Wow! I hope there will be more to this! :D

Wow. You are amazing. Every time I read your stories I fall into the worlds you create. I am your #1 fan! 3

Hey I just read your story and I really liked it!

Hope there's more to read someday!

Later

Okay. I am a super harsh reviewer. I absolutely HATE when people leave reviews saying, "This is SO great! I can't wait for the next chapter!" They use extra punctuation to make it sound extra important... you must know what I am talking about.

You do a great job at getting into character. First person is my absolue favorite style to write in. It takes guts and a whole lot of talent. You pulled it off, almost as flawlessly as me. (Ha, I boast.) Anyway,

THIS IS TOTALLY AWSOME! PLEASE, update soon!

(And then they add the creepy smiley face at the end.)

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R.