Reviews for Untitled
Mint Leafs chapter 11 . 8/28/2009
Just putting ya on mah story alert here...
Mint Leafs chapter 11 . 8/28/2009
Your summary rocks. It sucks me right in, and then the first lines won't let me leave! I have to keep reading!

Please post more. You're really creeping me out here, and I mean that in the nicest possible way _

It reminds me of the tone of the computer game least I think that's what it's called. It's a scary game *shudder*
creative b-tch chapter 11 . 8/28/2009
i lurve this story!
Jdog257 chapter 11 . 8/27/2009
I must say, I rather enjoy this story. The audience can tell that something dark is happening, but, using your style of writing, you manage to continually keep the audience interested while letting the charcter slowly unfold, letting us get to know your character. I like where it's going and cannot wait to see more.
WhereThereIsLoveThereIsLife chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
Awesome. I just can't even begin to explain. This is like, exactly my kind of thing. It may not be long or a particularly popular writing style, something people might frown upon, but I love it. It's so intense, and it makes me want more. It's so thrilling. Please update soon!
BriingMeTheHorizon chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
Wow, I'm liking this a lot!

It's very creative and interesting! ...Plus creepy.

I'm looking forward to more! :D
angel-the-twisted chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
I'm still enjoying this story! Keep up the good work!
That Patriotic Chick chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
This is seriously creeping me out, please update!
I Am The Masquerade chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Update soon please.
Alice.books chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
i love this story
I Am The Masquerade chapter 8 . 8/24/2009
Very good. I look forward to more chapters.
creative b-tch chapter 7 . 8/24/2009
i lurve this story! its da bomb!
halloween.homicide chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
I would like to see how this goes on.
Antonette C chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
Please continue, I know that something dark is lurking..
Dismantle14 chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
I like this.
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