Reviews for Untitled
I Am The Masquerade chapter 21 . 9/11/2009
Very creepy.
SoneAnna chapter 21 . 9/11/2009
OWOW soo...Narrator didn't really die in the house? :)

Yah for that cuz I couldn't stand being..."and i made a hammer shaped hole in the window" cuz it would drive me more nuts han I already am...

But JEEZUS that poor woman. ;_;
silent-anthem chapter 20 . 9/9/2009
nice story

suspenseful, wonderful, horrific

update soon

Fractured Illusion chapter 20 . 9/8/2009
-That mean You.-


Aw shucks, I am feeling really bad for Narrator :( What a torturous death!

I wonder what "it" wants... :o

InTheMorning218 chapter 20 . 9/5/2009
Creepy story! Please continue though!
I Am The Masquerade chapter 20 . 9/5/2009
Antonis chapter 19 . 9/5/2009
Holy shit this scared the hell out of me.
Aleczandriane Wicker chapter 19 . 9/5/2009
One word to describe this: freaky.

While I was reading this, I felt very much disturbed/scared/freaked out...yet I can't bring myself to stop reading this even if I know that this may haunt me in my sleep later [it's nighttime here right now]. It's as if this story has hypnotized me and still is; pulling and drawing me closer and closer...

I absolutely loved how you presented the narrator's emotions and how she was starting to doubt her own sanity and reality itself. Really well-written. I applaud you for that.

I haven't read a good horror story for a while now, and I must say this made an impact on me. I can't exactly say that the diary-entry style you have used is unique, but you have definitely made it your own!

This story is going to my favorites~! ;D

Please continue! I'd love to be creeped out by this story more. LOL. XDD (sadomasochist much? Hahaha. XD)
SoneAnna chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Well damn.

I must say this scared the living shit out of me and in the best way possible.

And with that, madam and/or sir, you are indeed a MASTER of suspense.

Good day, and I hope you continue writing. :)
Fractured Illusion chapter 19 . 9/5/2009
HOMG what a quick update :D Kudos! (I always take ages)

"I can feel it! I can feel it moving!"

Narrator, noo! T_T

Goddamn ghosts!

You really get a sense of how lonely she is in all this due to writing it all out in the log... In normal circumstances, it'd be freaking weird, but here, it's all she has T_T

I am going to be an optimist for once and hope that she makes it! *is reminded of last line*

"It is unknown whether the writer had actually made this record or not. It was badly scribbled in the corner. There was a drop of blood next to the word 'please'."


Losing a bit of blood never killed anyone though!

...But man, good line. I hope she wrote it. I don't want the ghosts to do these things!

*waiting patiently for update*

- Frac
Ingrid Indigo chapter 18 . 9/4/2009
I sort of understand her, actually. It would be really confusing to have all that happen. I love this story! :)

Please write more and I'll continue to review and read!
Fractured Illusion chapter 18 . 9/4/2009
Well damn, I am totally subscribing to this. It's been a long while since an FP story grabbed me like yours :) The plot itself might be kinda common but its told in a really unique way.

Update whenever you can!

-Frac, from the Review Game's Review marathon (link in profile)
Fractured Illusion chapter 17 . 9/4/2009
"It swung open effortlessly."


"It wouldn't open."



You know I am now starting to consider her just suffering some mental disorder or whatever. Stress from boyfriend leaving cheating or something, I dunno...
Fractured Illusion chapter 16 . 9/4/2009
Whoa, that was sincerely creepy! :O Well done! Goddamn ghosts...
Fractured Illusion chapter 15 . 9/4/2009
"While I tried to stop the bleeding and treating my hand, the hole disappeared."

. !

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