The twincest would've been so, so hot. I mean, just this is pretty hot.

I love it but please make more.A relationship between Bryan and Beau sound so make it.I read this story a while and I thought I had comment but anyways this story is so hot and should make more of it good job.

I totally agree with Randomness (yeah, I read the reviews before)...
Please make it into a 10 chapters fan fiction..! With Bryan having the hots for his own twin brother, but has been holding himself back because he knew that his 'perfect' brother would be disgusted by the idea of sex between brothers, so out of sheer jealousy and agony he steals his brother's love interest... Give a hot scene of the two of them making out! Do this and I'll give you 200 virtual Hershey's Kisses and you'll also win 100 brownie points for making your readers happy..!

No!
There has to be a sequel one shot follow up thing
Beau has to grt andrean seriously this CANNOT end here
THIS IS SO UNFAIR
Oh my god you literally have to continue, please
Ok just be like "3 years later Andrean realised what a dick bryan was and hooked up with beau and fell in love with him the end"
Oh wow i feel much better now.

Bryan sounds like a dick, but this story is brilliant.

I love twincest (: And I'm totally into Bryan's sadistic nature. I think he's got an amazing personality. I love their relationship.

It was sort of hard to tell where they were, but I didn't focus on that. Are they the same height? Do they look the same? I know their eyes are the same, which is fabulous. It's like a yin and yang sort of deal. XD I really hope you do more with these two, I love brother relationships. And I would be interested in finding more on what Bryan thought of Beau. Does he truly hate his brother? Or does he want his brother in a sinful way?

So many questions XD

Yeah, I think you could tell the story from this snippet...

What a nasty boy, going after the one his brother likes...and then using it against him..not nice at all.

Setting is unclear, try again.

that guy is such an asshole..

Very nicely done! Love it!

I love this. It is twisted, its cruel, its good.

D: bryan x beau please

Wow, this was something! I so wish this was not a oneshot because this could be a great story and am really really really hoping that you may consider writting it as a full story?

I liked Bryan even though he was a totall *hole to his brother but I feel that Bryan only wants to hurt his twin because he himself is hurting over him. Loved it :)

Wow, that was sexy.

Bryan is a hole!

but great work!

This is really good. Bryan is an $$hole, but then again sibling rivalry knows no bounds. Very sexy little snippet. Appears that this rivalry is deeply rooted.