Reviews for Secret Smile
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Ooh, I am enjoyable of this poem.

First of all, I must commend you on the flow. The rhyme scheme was flawless and the flow...well, it flowed! Syllables and syntax were all in order. The language was exquisite and exotic. Words like cherish, twinge, compelling just made it fantastic. The (seemingly) random capitalizations intrigued me; was there something incredibly special about those words? They seemed like important, central parts of the piece. I really enjoyed this piece-the feeling unresolvedness at the end did not detract from that. I do, however, wonder if that was a purposeful part of the piece. Either way, I liked it.

Great piece! I really enjoyed reading it.
xenolith chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I clicked on this because the title and the summary jumped out at me. Then I read the poem, and I know nothing about poetry at all, but I absolutely loved it.

'Your memory on my skin.'

There's just something about that line, it's wonderful, inspirational dare I say ;) I think it's going to stay in my head for some time, so I thank you for that. Great work!
words are all I have chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I love this, it describes the feeling of lust so well.
bvwpeanut chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
This poem is great, it's so short, but its great :)