|Reviews for Stolen, yet Satisfied|
| Elementer chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
The heart has been consumed,
I like this poem. For it to be so short it gets in a lot of emotion.
"Although stolen and used repeatedly, nothing else fills it more with glee." I felt was a pretty powerful line.
You have a a very powerful and colorful vocabulary. And you like showing it off. Which I like in a writer. Everytime I have to look up a word in a story it puts a smile on my face. Unless it repeative. But you didn't do that.
While the vocab is top-notch. It's disappointingly simplistic and short. While short poetry is some of the best I felt you could have made it a bit longer.
In all a 9.1 out of 10.
For you to be new, you are an outstanding author.