Reviews for Jihad
mAcHiNe4231 chapter 22 . 10/24/2012
oooo I wanna slap that woman upside the face! puh! she has no baWls I'm telling u hwat! I'm so happy Alex and Kiara are together again! it feels better. Alex really needed someone to complete him :3 now he's all super awesome again _ and that whole scene with them in the ocean... very sweet and the sunburn hilarious! not that I don't appreciate the day to day life in this setting with these characters, im starting to wonder where the story is going. there hasn't been definite plot progression in a while. also i've been dreaming about resistances a lot lately :P they're fun.
Helgabertoni chapter 22 . 10/24/2012
Loved the new chapter! I would have reviewed sooner but I couldn't remember if I already had or not. Lol. Anyways keep up the good work and keep churning out new chapters:) update soon!:)
Gabriela chapter 22 . 10/22/2012
I... am definitely suspicious of Sarah now. Hope you elaborate more on that soon. Great chapter! Can't wait till the next one :)
xxxxxxx07 chapter 22 . 10/22/2012
GO RESISTANCE! hahaha I just had to say that :) But dude you like updated quickly and you have no idea how happy I am! I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is such an awesome story!
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 22 . 10/22/2012
Awesome! I'm wondering about Sarah's future importance... hmmmmm... Hehe. Declan totally knew. Love it! Update soon!
Aurora Olivers chapter 22 . 10/22/2012
I also wanted to say sorry for the late reviews haha! But I like the way you introduced these new characters. Sarah is particularly fascinating, and I'm glad that things aren't all happy go lucky, it wouldn't fit to this story at this point. At least not yet! Once again you write some amazing stuff. I feel like all those persons you write about are real, but that's how a good story is supposed to make you feel. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Aurora out
xXxRandomKatxXx chapter 22 . 10/22/2012
Holy crap... you update fast! _ T'was reading chapter 21 and Chapter 22 appeared when I went to review. Yay! Great job, by the way.
Aurora Olivers chapter 21 . 10/22/2012
Hallelujah! Finally haha! But okay now I just have one question, what bad thing will happen next?
Gabriela chapter 21 . 10/20/2012
I am absolutely in love with this.
Helgabertoni chapter 21 . 10/20/2012
Yay you finally updated! I've been waiting for you to update all week. As usual it was a well written and exciting chapter! Can't wait to read more, so update soon!:)
xxxxxxx07 chapter 21 . 10/20/2012
Poor Alana! at least shes safe now. omg somethings going on between Declan and Bonnie! time for more drama lol i can't wait to read the next chapter and this was worth the wait :)
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 21 . 10/20/2012
Awww! So cute! love it! Alex and Kiara are so adorable together. Ate they official yet? An the Alana scene was cute too! And GAHHH! I dot know what to think. Declan and Bonnie seem cute but then I remember Louise and I... aghh. Update soon!
mAcHiNe4231 chapter 20 . 10/18/2012
omg u need to update I'm going insane over here waiting for more! _
mAcHiNe4231 chapter 20 . 10/10/2012
omg. so cute! I hope Alex comes out of his depression... you did a really good job of making it real. its really easy for ppl to trivialize those kinds of things. can't wait for the next chpt!
Rose chapter 20 . 10/10/2012
Absolutely brilliant! I've just spent the past few hours speeding through all these chapters. I'm in love with the story. Very relevant, informed and vivid.

I can sense a little of the Tomorrow series by John Marsden, mixed with many dystopian-themed influences. The setting is refreshing! Being an Aussie myself, I was constantly intrigued by your use of locations and how you managed to make the story of rebellion so fitted to our country's unique geography, mish-mash of cultures and customs. The story also shows an awareness of world events, politics and history. Great job.

I also deeply admire how you built up the personalities of the minor faction, however my only nitpick to make it even more of a great read than it is, is for more character development - especially in the lead-up the Seb's betrayal (Unless you have more up your sleeves, that is!) But the beauty of it is that since they are united as a front, there really isn't a need for too much depth, as most of their personalities, quirks and motives were created as a result of tragedy, and developed similarly as a direct consequence of this.

One of my favourite reads on FictionPress so far! Keep it up :)
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