Reviews for Withou You
Isca chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
"Deep blue [...] the cloudless sky stretches on." This is a very philosophical opening - it's very quiet and gentle.

"But inside I feel empty." I like the raw tone of this line - it's very abrupt and powerful.

"I'm not deserving of your love." Aww, that's so sad!
Alice Cullen629 chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
I like this, its really sweet!
Natacia chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Very nice. The middle section was a little weak, but the tie to the begining and end was very strong and heartfelt. Overall, nice work!