Reviews for Choice
The Lucy Program chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Lol, very original! Your vampire's decision to let the girl live and leave her home intact despite temptation added a dimension to him. Instead of portraying the original depiction of vampires as evil and sinister monsters, or this new weird depiction of vampires as super sexy and deliciously dangerous, you did us all a favor and mixed the good parts of the two. I applaud you. Also, your writing style was very lovely. It was almost poetic, and the words flowed very nicely. Good job. :]

Blessed Be,

TLP.
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Your character had a clear voice in your narrative, which I really liked, as I felt as if I could hear him in my mind. I also loved the descriptions here, especially of the kitchen and of the pendant, because they added some nice touches to the setting, and gave the whole piece a romantic feel.

Sakina x