|Reviews for Slipping|
| eaststar chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
I see the symbolism but better short, witty stanzas than long, repeating poems. If it were shortened, it'd be perfect.
| Broken-Angel-1994 chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Wow, this is really beautiful. I love the rhyme, and the way it all flows together. I can honestly say that I love this. It's wonderful, and deep, and the rhyming isn't forced, and I love it. This is so going on my favorites. :D :D Great work. :D :D