Reviews for Watched
Carmel March chapter 15 . 7/25/2015
What a great ending to this story! I was so happy to see this update, and I loved the way you decided to close the story. It was perfectly fitting. Thank you so much for writing and posting this! :)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/24/2015
I really love this. The fact you never named the main two characters was, in my opinion, a perfect way to force the reader to look at them as human beings and value their personalities more than whatever connotations would come with names. I read a previous comment that said it makes no sense that she would be interested in him based on window dining - each to their own, of course, but I think that's quite a shallow way of looking at it. It's not the window dining so much as the mystery and intrigue it would invoke - the desire to know more. All in all, I think this is wonderful.
augmentedDREAMS chapter 15 . 7/22/2015
This story could be a perfect example of the saying, "actions speak louder than words."

I love the way how you hardly divulge anything about the main characters- let alone their names- yet they have more of a personality than any other story's character whose entire life story has been laid out for the readers.

I actually like that you haven't given the main characters names, in my opinion it gives them some sort of individuality. I cannot compare them to anyone whose name corresponds with theirs neither can my opinion about them be influenced because of their names.

You have written a beautiful story that stays true to it's plot and characters. I absolutely loved it.
LetMeWonder chapter 15 . 7/19/2015
Oh my gosh! I'm so happy they get another chance! Thank you for the great read.
zanybellecloudo chapter 5 . 7/19/2015
I'm sorry I do not get this story at all. It doesn't seem like a romance more a twisted fantasy. It makes no sense why she would be interested in him based on window dining. It's actually even stranger to suggest she'd visit him after his vulgar antics. Maybe this is more smutty than romantic and perhaps builds to believable emotional situations but the main character comes across as grossly unappealing so I can't see how. Sorry.
Carmel March chapter 14 . 3/18/2015
So glad to see an update, and it certainly was worth the wait! Really great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
LetMeWonder chapter 14 . 3/18/2015
I actually feel really bad for him- she really was his better half.
Pione chapter 14 . 3/16/2015
This update has been such a nice surprise. I hope to read more of it soon. Interesting to see that six months has past since the last time they saw each other. I wonder how things will go from here.
LetMeWonder chapter 13 . 1/24/2015
Pione chapter 13 . 11/23/2014
Wow. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story because this is really good. The narration is unusual but very interesting. Really looking forward to reading the next chapters.
Carmel March chapter 13 . 11/15/2014
Loving this story! Thanks for updating :)
Imika chapter 13 . 11/9/2014
I have loved this story ever since the beginning that you had posted it, and I'm really glad that you haven't stopped. :3

I liked this chapter, too :D

- Imika
Usuicross chapter 11 . 9/9/2013
I have been following this story for quite a while. :) Sure, the updates are late, but I still like it. A lot.

Thanks for writing this.

foxyricanlady chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
OMG! finally... well that was great but I hope you update soon.
primeproper chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
I like this fucked up story and I don't knos why
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