|Reviews for Ugly, Luminescent, Painful, Euphoric|
| eaststar chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
If this poem is about endurance, you should have shortened up the bad part of life and focused more on the endurance instead of making it a short quirk in the end. Unless you meant it sarcastically, which I see you didn't. But I love your vocabulary, you used it in a smart way to make the poem wordy but graceful.